Yumerki [Item reg]

Novice Posts : 21 Join date : 2013-10-08 Age : 27

Name: Water skin
Description: A basic water canister. Holds three gallons of water.

Grandmaster Posts : 34 Join date : 2013-09-19

YumerkiAburama wrote:: Name: Water skin
Description: A basic water canister. Holds three gallons of water.

Approved.

Novice Posts : 21 Join date : 2013-10-08 Age : 27

Name:Twilight Cycle-
Description :A fan in which contains the spirit of his mother.There fore it allows him to water bend using nothing more than itself. Due to his mothers wishes it only opens at the touch of Yumerki and shows his level of current power,and not hers. Printed upon it's inner spokes are the Moons Lunar cycle. On the other side lays his mothers face.

Novice Posts : 21 Join date : 2013-10-08 Age : 27

Name:Ariados
Type:Combat
Rank:Novice
Element:N/A
Species: Black widow
Description: Ariados however is a very frighten creature that follows Yumerki any ,and everywhere.Happy at times the fragile insect does not enjoy fights what so ever. It can't speak but remains the holder of a high intellect. During most travel she can but doesn't try to help Yumerki in any fights fearing her own demise.
Special Characteristics: None
Abilities: Wall climbing:This creature may cling to different things,objects,and people.
Venom:The venom of Airados is bit more potent than a normal spiders being a black widow. This venom is highly toxic an will kill the victim in 4 minutes(5posts.)
Venom spray: Ariados can release a stream of it's venom to about 4 ft.This if direct contact with eyes may cause blindness.

Grandmaster Posts : 34 Join date : 2013-09-19

YumerkiAburama wrote:: Name:Twilight Cycle-
Description :A fan in which contains the spirit of his mother.There fore it allows him to water bend using nothing more than itself. Due to his mothers wishes it only opens at the touch of Yumerki and shows his level of current power,and not hers. Printed upon it's inner spokes are the Moons Lunar cycle. On the other side lays his mothers face.

Okay. This weapon is basicly something higher level masqerading as a a lower item. Being that it only opens at your touch, this is something that would have to wait until a higher rank.

Grandmaster Posts : 34 Join date : 2013-09-19

YumerkiAburama wrote:: Name:Ariados
Type:Non-Combat
Rank:Novice
Description: Ariados however is a very frighten creature that follows Yumerki any ,and everywhere.Happy at times the fragile insect does not enjoy fights what so ever. It can't speak but remains the holder of a high intellect. During most travel she can but doesn't try to help Yumerki in any fights fearing her own demise.
Abilities: Abilities: Wall climbing:This creature may cling to different things,objects,and people.
Venom:The venom of Airados is bit more potent than a normal spiders being a black widow. This venom is highly toxic an will kill the victim in 4 minutes(5posts.)
Venom spray: Ariados can release a stream of it's venom to about 4 ft.This if direct contact with eyes may cause blindness.

Being that this has venom and such, this automaticly becomes a combat pet.

Novice Posts : 21 Join date : 2013-10-08 Age : 27

O.O Oh I thought. It being tiny made. It useless in combat. I understand the the weapon statement.

Grandmaster Posts : 34 Join date : 2013-09-19

YumerkiAburama wrote:: O.O Oh I thought. It being tiny made. It useless in combat. I understand the the weapon statement.

Simply because its tiny, does not make it useless in combat. Essentially, something like that is similar to Shino's bugs -- it would take only a simple punch to plant the spider, and have it bite someone.

As for your weapon, it has a spirit inhabiting it, correct? By site standards, this would make it much more powerful that simply refusing to open to anyone other than you. In order to have a weapon like that, one must go to the spirit world, and convince a spirit to possess the item-- even if its the spirit of your own mother.

Novice Posts : 21 Join date : 2013-10-08 Age : 27

Alright I'll find a air bender skilled enough to take me into the spirit world.

Novice Posts : 21 Join date : 2013-10-08 Age : 27

Ok I have fixed the pet template.

Grandmaster Posts : 204 Join date : 2013-09-19

Nom combat pets can't have combat abilities, hun.

Novice Posts : 21 Join date : 2013-10-08 Age : 27

X.x I forgot to change that part.

Acolyte Posts : 115 Join date : 2013-10-09 Age : 37

Quote :: Abilities: Abilities: Wall climbing:This creature may cling to different things,objects,and people.
Venom:The venom of Airados is bit more potent than a normal spiders being a black widow. This venom is highly toxic an will kill the victim in 4 minutes(5posts.)
Venom spray: Ariados can release a stream of it's venom to about 4 ft.This if direct contact with eyes may cause blindness.(Houjin asked me to work in every section for now, hence why I am posting here and just prior in jobs.)

That poison ability, it's poison, is OP, just plain OP. No offense, but in real life a black widow doesn't kill, it just causes agony. And 5 posts in a topic can be less than 2 minutes or more than 20. It's impossible to tell. And it would be easy to discretely bite anyone, if it ever got the courage. This is just way too op for a normal pet. Even without the death in 5 posts, it would near paralyze someone as their muscles tense up without their control, and they would be easily killed. I recommend another pet.

btw, you have a coding error, the whole of abilities is bold, not just the ability names.

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